Well rested, freshly showered, and clothed, Bradford looks at himself in the mirror as he expertly coifs his hair, making sure each strand layers just right, complementing his handsome face. A little gel swiped from root to tip, just above his forehead, completes his stylish do.
He walks from bathroom to bedroom; Brad scans himself, looks at his full body image, making sure his T-shirt, color and length, work well with his just right fitting, side-pocket khakis. Too cool shoes and a swag pullover hoodie are the final details. And just to make sure his assessment of perfection is correct, Bradford heads to the garage, to another full-length mirror, rotating oh so carefully, content with what he sees.
Then, its out the door, onto his bike, heading to school, for another ordinary day in the 8th grade.
So beautifully expressed. It reminds me of a poem I found last year – let me search for it and I will email it to you. Would be him in another couple of years….
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thanks, amy…. oh, that’d be great… i hope you find the poem…
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Yep. Well-written description!
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Thank you, Su-sieee! π
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thank you, su-sieee!
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Haha! Nice. Captured the 8th grade-spirit perfectly.
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Brad’s definitely into fashion. He makes it easy to detail, with words, how he’s dressed for the day!
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it’s funny in a way…. he’s not girl obsessed… this is just something he likes to do for himself (and mind you, i am not complaining!)
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Yes– I’ve been there at one time in my past. Great write!
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Thanks, Duffee. I don’t think I was ever so involved with my looks.
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haha, that was like a little twist at the end, I was thinking “oh, what a self-absorbed man”, and then reading the last sentence made me smile.
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ooo, I sure hope he mellows out as he ages, and finds other priorities.
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Oooh, I have an 8th grader too. It’s all about the hair, clothes and accessories these days. π
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I always thought it was a girl thing… not anymore! π
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Ten minutes later he fell in a huge mud puddle just as the girl he fancied went by, giggling iwth her friends *grin* Great little snapshot of life xx
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oh, man, that would definitely ruin his day…. π
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Cutie:)
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thanks, Talya!
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Aww, I like Bradford. Wonder if he has a sweetie he’s trying to impress.
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well, i will say, there are girls he thinks are cute, but no one specific… not yet…. high school is around the corner… π
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I didn’t think 9th grade boys cared much how they looked. Guess this one’s going to be a real ladies man….
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Kate, as much as he is concerned about his looks, he’s just as much a great kid, and very respectful….. if he’s a ladies man, he’s clueless… he thinks all the girls like his friends… (works for me!) π
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I wish I could get my 9th grader to pay that much attention to how he looks!
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I asked Brad what it took for him to be so involved in fashion…. “It’s a personal thing, you can’t make anyone be concerned about how they look, they have to want to be involved…. and I like clothes, and looking good”… (sounds reasonable) π
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